Danielle:You have the location basics, but could have gone further. For example, you could have shown pictures of Indonesia. A more detailed description would have been more effective.Try to make your home page more 'noticeable'.B+...78%
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Danielle:
You have the location basics, but could have gone further. For example, you could have shown pictures of Indonesia. A more detailed description would have been more effective.
Try to make your home page more 'noticeable'.
B+...78%
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